Review Detail of Alexis_Portillo_8423 in Immortal almana

Item: Immortal almana
Rating: 2.6

Review detail

Alexis_Portillo_8423Lv11yrAlexis_Portillo_8423

the first chapter had me hooked i dont know what it was but it made me want to keep reading. It lacks a bit of feelings and there are many simple mistakes. I will add this to my library since I like it and will look forward to the upcoming chapters. Don’t give up since it’s your first novel.

Immortal almana

C4ndy

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C4ndyAuthorC4ndy

Thank you for the review. I‘ve been informed of my mistakes and they have been pointed out so I will be making a few changes to it in order to improve the story. Thank you and I hope you stick around.

1yr

Sweet_Vanilla553Lv13Sweet_Vanilla553

Hello there, give a review about mine too. " Waiting for the light"

1yr