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So: a really good premise and an interesting ability. Special forces and an ability that can multiply or reduce the laws of physics and other peoples powers, which gives a solid base to build a story on. Character design: Starts out really good, the MC seems well thought of. But then the "legal loli" appears and he turns into a horn dog. She pampers him, he is - this close to fudging her and what the heck happened to my nice story and the good premise? World Background: Actually great, well thought of and interesting. Writing Quality: Pretty good for a Webnovel.

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