Worldbuilding was pretty weak. It really only involves two nations. It’s fine but with a war between two countries you would think other nations would be involved. It’s a weak nitpick but the world does feel a little stale like that. A lot of schemes don’t pay off well. Like too much stuff happens that doesn’t pay off in a meaningful way because the real plan was something else entirely. And a lot of stuff gets hyped up like the abyss sword but it goes nowhere. I don’t think the dragon sword gets reforged either. Ending was super rushed. All in all the world feels empty, and the story is confusing and unsatisfying.
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