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At the beginning it was fine but everything went to shit, the mc who is the most intelligent has the power to read the mind and influence it, it is supposed that he had everything planned for him to become stronger with a serum he created, but it seems that his super intelligence and his powers are useless, after he left for two months it seems that homelander replaced the mc because he stole a serum that made him more powerful, characters betrayed the mc, homelander made chaos until he stole Ryan, who was an important experimental subject for him, is supposed to be the smartest, he even has an artificial intelligence that had everything under control and he couldn't think that they were going to steal a serum that was in a Fucking safe, after this I couldn't take the mc seriously and even when he had already absorbed the serum he didn't even show up to stop homelander, you can't expect much from a fanfic but this is at the top of those who start off well and ruin it by forcing the plot. (google translator) xD

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Conquering The Omni-Verse!

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