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I just write pros and Cons of this work. But divide it by the worlds. Because author does improve some things. And make a new mistakes. The boys. + mc is actually a villain! +some ideas are pretty great. - everything is so forced. You can predict how the story goes very easily. Like the first time mc mentioned Victoria, he already give away ending. - Mc just wastes his time and his plans doesn't work. -60 + chapters of useless fillers, out of 74 chapters in a first volume. Literally you could delete them, nothing gonna change. - romance done so poorly that people asked in comments, does mc actually loves Victoria at the end. That's just mental, dude. +cool powers. Can't do anything, they are just cool. The invincible world. + it's feels more natural and less forced. + at least mc plans starts to work. +the world much more interesting then boys. +romance become better*. Somewhat. At least it's doesn't feel like you chocking on a big NOSE in you troat. - Mc still love to waste time. -Mc isn't acting as a villain. In first volume we got at least some scenes where mc been evil, now there is nothing. A villain tag is why im here, and it's doesn't work... Great. * mc doesn't want to waste time on queen maeeve, but somehow amazonia us different....you don't see a problem here? So yeah. Can't say much good about it... But author really does improve in a second volume. So that's something.

Conquering The Omni-Verse!

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great reviews 🗽