Review Detail of Taco_sallad in Conquering The Omni-Verse!
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Story went to shit when the author gave homelander more power for no reason and made the supposed smartest man on earth, being the mc make a sloppy fucking mistake. Was good until ch 47. Will keep reading however it is dissapointing
Conquering The Omni-Verse!
KingSeyer
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Must have read wrong then. Then the decision wasnt as stupid as i before thought however i still really didnt like you giving homelander power. Could have defeated him and gone to a new world. Just my opinion though
KingSeyer:How does making Homelander more powerful do what you're saying? I'm just building the plot to become more concrete since Homelander is the titular villain and due to the main characters involvement in things, things are bound to change. Mc hasn't made any mistake, Mc isn't the supervisor of Compound Vs, he's just the creator. Even if Mc did in fact make a mistake, it's normal, he isn't perfect...yet. Thanks For The Review Though.
How does making Homelander more powerful do what you're saying? I'm just building the plot to become more concrete since Homelander is the titular villain and due to the main characters involvement in things, things are bound to change. Mc hasn't made any mistake, Mc isn't the supervisor of Compound Vs, he's just the creator. Even if Mc did in fact make a mistake, it's normal, he isn't perfect...yet. Thanks For The Review Though.
Oh yeah but I remember when I started writing this novel that someone told me to expand the 'The Boys' arc and not just skip it after getting powers. There aren't many The Boys fics so all I'm basically doing is making it more expansive and dynamic in terms of plot.
Taco_sallad:Must have read wrong then. Then the decision wasnt as stupid as i before thought however i still really didnt like you giving homelander power. Could have defeated him and gone to a new world. Just my opinion though