Review Detail of Thomas_Ederson in Vice Captain of the Straw Hat Pirates

(The story becomes takes a Nose dive when he eats the devil fruit. )Despite the mediocre story building of many fanfics where the MC follows the straw hats, this exceeds many expectations. To me it was a fresh breather from the edge lords, martial masters(with an over zealous opinion of always being stronger that anyone for no reason at all), or "emotionally" sound protagonists(that somehow go from office worker to ruthless indifference to killing and torturing).