Review Detail of Aescwine in Lost Memories: Vanitas
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I have a few things to tell you all. This is going to be an experimental novel. By that, I mean I have no plans of this story getting contracted during its original run here. First I will complete the whole story and then after careful revisions and edits, I will think of what to do next with this. But till then, yeah, this work 'should' be free. On that note, I would like you, readers, to give me your suggestion for my improvement. And I would like you to treat this review as a Q and A section. You can ask whatever you want regarding the novel here and I will try to answer everyone to the best of my abilities. Hope you will enjoy reading this story!
Lost Memories: Vanitas
Aescwine
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No harem. There may be strong friendship between MC and other girls but not love. We have only one love interest.
Lazy_Chicken_God:Harem?
I actually have a LOT of questions, I'm sure many of them will be answered automatically by the story anyway, I know cuz I've had to remove quite a few from the list haha 1. Can you break a contract with a demon? 2. Can you switch demons? Like, take the scenario of a powerful person makes a contract with a weaker demon, could they replace that demon with a stronger demon with another contract? 3. Can a person have contracts with multiple demons at once? 4. Can they even have contracts with more than one demon in their entire life? (I mean even if it’s not at the same time) 5. Can a person slowly develop traits of the demon they’re contracted with? Say, if they let one take control too many times or something like that. Basically what I’m asking is, can the demon control you? I don’t mean like, when you LET the demon take over, I mean, can a demon control a person without them being aware of it? Or maybe like not being controlled but, as I said first, slowly developing the demon’s characteristics? 6. Is there a particular country this military ranking system is based on? (Say the British or American) 7. How old are the characters Vanitas, Melfina, Edward, Dominique an Eleanor respectively? 8. Does Vanitas know how old he is? 9. A lot from chapter 20 like, how much of his memories exactly are wiped each time? How much of his memory was taken in chapter 20? Is it the memories of over a certain period of time? Is it a consistent span of time each time or do simply all his memories get wiped? Oh wait could it be depending on how much power he requires from the demon? 10. Can the demon not abuse this contract? Like, with Vanitas’ case in particular, would the demon be able to take particular memories of it’s choice? Or manipulate Vanitas, considering he’s in a vulnerable state after losing his memories. 11. Or even worse, could the demon make it’s powers do something like burn even people who AREN’T Vanitas’ enemies? Like Eleanor and the others in Chapter 20? I imagine it’s evil enough to do something like that. Ahh I wrote so many, I'm so sorry I might have gotten a little crazy on some of these haha like "How tf did we even get to this point??"
Cookie_TheWookie:I actually have a LOT of questions, I'm sure many of them will be answered automatically by the story anyway, I know cuz I've had to remove quite a few from the list haha 1. Can you break a contract with a demon? 2. Can you switch demons? Like, take the scenario of a powerful person makes a contract with a weaker demon, could they replace that demon with a stronger demon with another contract? 3. Can a person have contracts with multiple demons at once? 4. Can they even have contracts with more than one demon in their entire life? (I mean even if it’s not at the same time) 5. Can a person slowly develop traits of the demon they’re contracted with? Say, if they let one take control too many times or something like that. Basically what I’m asking is, can the demon control you? I don’t mean like, when you LET the demon take over, I mean, can a demon control a person without them being aware of it? Or maybe like not being controlled but, as I said first, slowly developing the demon’s characteristics? 6. Is there a particular country this military ranking system is based on? (Say the British or American) 7. How old are the characters Vanitas, Melfina, Edward, Dominique an Eleanor respectively? 8. Does Vanitas know how old he is? 9. A lot from chapter 20 like, how much of his memories exactly are wiped each time? How much of his memory was taken in chapter 20? Is it the memories of over a certain period of time? Is it a consistent span of time each time or do simply all his memories get wiped? Oh wait could it be depending on how much power he requires from the demon? 10. Can the demon not abuse this contract? Like, with Vanitas’ case in particular, would the demon be able to take particular memories of it’s choice? Or manipulate Vanitas, considering he’s in a vulnerable state after losing his memories. 11. Or even worse, could the demon make it’s powers do something like burn even people who AREN’T Vanitas’ enemies? Like Eleanor and the others in Chapter 20? I imagine it’s evil enough to do something like that. Ahh I wrote so many, I'm so sorry I might have gotten a little crazy on some of these haha like "How tf did we even get to this point??"
Aescwine:No harem. There may be strong friendship between MC and other girls but not love. We have only one love interest.