By all means, this is an honest review once again. I'd repeat the same thing again. This time, I would just say two things. First, you got the hit market, you just have to expound it. You have the title, you have the CEO plotline and the growth of the female lead the way the readers wanted... still, something is lacking. When you're writing a CEO novel, make sure that you are on the right track, or else you're book will just be added to the pile of CEO books who didn't take much up on readers as you expected it to be. Second, the issue of capitalization. Make sure to capitalize what is necessary. E.g., The CEO's Fallen Angel, instead of just putting a lowercase letters on the Fallen and Angel. This is just a guide for you to improve and nothing has been that sure with better writing. Remember, you are doing a great job! Good luck on your future endeavors!
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