Review Detail of Noct_is in Vengeful Ascension: The Rise of a Demon Emperor

I am the type of reader that only reads the first chapter or so then calls quits so my reviews may be a bit lazy but you got me to reach the second chapter just by mc's comedy so I approve. I know writing and stuff takes extensive planning and it can be a tiring chore really. For me I like stuff straight to the point so if I were to write a novel it would have story and world building but maybe missing bits of process of explanation in logic. All I see in first chapters is that authors do like 33 paragraphs but a lot of them are just written in 2 lines with good spacing. I am digressing... Anyway you could make it big as an author you are able to overcome your hurdle of consistency!