Review Detail of FandomExplorer_2nd in The Mechanical Era

Item: The Mechanical Era
Rating: 3.8

Review detail

FandomExplorer_2ndLv410mthFandomExplorer_2nd

....I don't know why but i know that this novel can be more good like i feel like the story kinda got stale or something.. and i feel like the dialogue of the characters is kinda (Stale)But all and all its just my opinion though (Note : I am not a writer myself so...)

The Mechanical Era

MaxLostchild

Liked it!

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MaxLostchildAuthorMaxLostchild

I completely understand. I am currently going through a rewrite of the novel, to fix a lot of issues presented in it. It will take some time though .

10mth

FandomExplorer_2ndLv4FandomExplorer_2nd

I will wait where there will be time you can make this a better novel

MaxLostchild:I completely understand. I am currently going through a rewrite of the novel, to fix a lot of issues presented in it. It will take some time though .

10mth