Review Detail of Shinning_Light in This Is My Primitive Tribe

how do I start this one... Guess I could go with, the story is about a tribe in a possibly alternative version of the past earth (why only possibly is cause we have no idea what life was genuinely like back then, only little tid-bits where understood) during the middle of the stone age. when you look at it from the point of view of a modern life, you see something too out of place. overall 10/10... just needs a bit of refining and a little bit of extra world building, and it will be perfect 🥰