Review Detail of The_WindChaser in The Wizard of The Seas

Greetings! This novel has just started out, and I'm a new writer. Yay! I'm giving this five stars because it's my work, but I know that I still have shortcomings. I hope you guys could point out those that I don't notice. Lastly, I will try to excel in giving you guys both a smooth and comfortable read as I serve you guys a wonderful story. Enjoy!