Review Detail of m00nflower in I, Your Father, Carry a Big Stick

As expected of my Great-Grandfather, another amazing fanfic. The main character of this fanfic is an anti-social elitist who is a bit of a psychopath. (from my perspective) From reading the first 25 chapters, I see that each and every character is carefully studied and nicely executed. For example, Shikamaru and his father actually seem astute and smart, and Hiruzen seems like a wisened grandfather. The characters feel real, and their actions and reactions are logical. The MC's presence changes lots of things, of course, and the author isn't afraid to change the original plot in response to the characters' decisions. For every action, there is a corresponding reaction, and that makes this fanfic unpredictable yet logical. Of course, that means that nothing is set in stone, and that you should be patient. There are only a few fight scenes as of this moment, but they are both descriptive and not a pain to read through. That's all for now, thanks for the fanfic, Ein!