I have read the original, the fic is quite good. There is plenty of logic and no big plot holes. It is a noharem with a Hyuga girl, but the romance is actually very believable. It is a slowburn romance. I am rating the original, but if I can change some things it would probably be that he would assassinate Hiruzen instead of playing games with him.
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LIKEDaoistfeimox:Hello, I have a question, do you have the link? hola una pregunta tienes el link
Spoiler: he makes a deal with Hiruzen, where he has to assassinate all his supporters (everyone pro-Hiruzen, including other advisors) himself to save the Sarutobi clan and also follow his plot death versus Orochimaru to boost Konoha's morale.
Leo_Bassist:Did he kill hiruzen later on?
magnet_release:Spoiler: he makes a deal with Hiruzen, where he has to assassinate all his supporters (everyone pro-Hiruzen, including other advisors) himself to save the Sarutobi clan and also follow his plot death versus Orochimaru to boost Konoha's morale.image