Review Detail of BrewingFantasies in Six Ways To Sunday

[Reviewed on: 08-09-2022] [Reading status: 3 chapters] [Reviewer: Aysel Inara] -*-*-*-*- REMARKS: - Talking about the cover first, please add some cover. Without it the book seems like a dropped or deleted version. - Synopsis seems good, I still suggest to shuffle it. Move the later part of synopsis up and the scene [take from chapter which is placed in synopsis] move it down as second half of synopsis. - Now let's move to the title, I still don't understand what significance it holds. Mind changing it to less poetic and more direct title? Because this one won't catch attention at all, also it's too vague to give anything about the plot. - Let's directly slip to chapter 1, it was interesting, hyped, catchy and intriguing. Good work there. - I grew bored soon in the middle of chapter 2 until the slap scene came in. Good job in putting it as somewhat cliffhanger. - Chapter 3 was great in terms of unfolding more into the plotline and taking us to why the abduction occurred. - I personally loved how the information was split into chunks to make sure the reader would grasp everything and not forget or overlook it. - However, lastly please don't make the paragraphs more than 6 lines It just tire the eyes with the outlook.