Review Detail of Prince_nonchalant in Unravel The World

The book has an interesting take. I must say that it grabbed my attention in the very first chapter. The MC is certainly unique and not one that most people try to write these days. I like his dark outlook on life. Synopsis: Honestly, this could have been done better. While reading it, I wasn't sure what it was trying to convey. I felt a little confused and so I dived into the story without knowing what to expect. Writing Quality: This is very good. In terms of punctuations, vocabulary, etc, it is done very well. I saw a few instances where capitalizations were missing but those might have just slipped past the author. I'd recommend using Grammarly to catch those hidden errors. Story Development: Again, I like the MC. The story seems interesting and unique. It feels like a breath of fresh air when compared to most of the "copy and paste" stories I've seen. I can get behind the author with this one in regards to pacing and quality. World Background/Building: Not bad. Few more words could be used to describe the setting of the world but that's fine. This book is mixed with normal and abnormal things which I like. Overall: The story seems pretty solid so far. I like the direction and build-up around the character and his attitude. I am the type of person who loves character development though, so while I like the "Nigerian Prince" so far, a change in his attitude, later on, would do him justice. Good job and keep up the good work author!