Review Detail of AntCafe in Justiciar - Lord of the Mysteries

I am writing this review at chapter 8 so my points may not be relevant as the story progresses and I may mention spoilers below I have decided to list my opinions in dot points as I ended up writing paragraphs of gibberish - our MC has had no interaction with other characters further than a few sentences per interaction - the MC is going up the sequences way to fast and has led to (in my opinion) way to many timeskips before a story has reached even 10 chapters - many important events such as how he set up his organisation were glossed over with a timeskip - we have yet to see the main character even use his beyonder abilities and he's in sequence 6 now - the plots progression seems a bit forced such as how the MC becomes a beyonder is literally just him sending a letter to his father asking him to let him become a beyonder or promote rinse and repeat so far - the grammar of the novel while not the best and can get a bit on the nerves is still understandable and relatively clear in terms of what the Author wants to convey The good points of the story are still noticeable however - it's a unique premise among the LOTM fanfics I have read with the mc being transmigrated into the prince (I can't spell or remember his name apologies) - The MC is actually under 'orders' from someone and has his progression watched (is it a dumb idea in LOTM? yeah, but is it relatively unique out of the fanfics I have read? yes) - we have a chance in the future to see a MC get involved in the politics of LOTM which I think could be pretty interesting seeing how beyonders mingle with the higher classes of nobility and how the nobles protect themselves from beyonders and so on please keep in mind thst this review was only written as chapter 8 is released and hence could become obsolete in the future, but at the moment I believe the story is OK but it could definitely be improved by the Author fleshing out some details such as how the MC made his organisation or at least making the MC encounter some setbacks or something that drives the plot along, such as when he takes his next potion he begins to hear a mumbling in his ears pointing to a person/place or conveying some message like what Klein experienced to help push along the plot as so far the MC has no driving force since his goal to survive has probably been temporarily achieved as his father using him as a disposable pawn at sequence 6 compared to his (from my knowledge) non-beyonder brothers seems strange to me, either way my ranting aside this novel at the moment has alot of flaws however none of these are fatal to the story and the story itswlf has alot of room for growth that we will likely see alongside the growth of the Author, so at this stage in my eyes take it as a light hearted read and don't come into this expecting a story that perfectly encapsulated the world of Lord Of The Mysteries