Review Detail of GodOfTwoPaths in All Systems Are Broken

Item: All Systems Are Broken
Rating: 1

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GodOfTwoPathsLv151yrGodOfTwoPaths

I'll be honest. the way it's being written gives me an absolute headache. I'll keep reading up until it becomes premium to see if it gets better. if it does I'll change my review. please fix your writing style .

All Systems Are Broken

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HyuuseLv3Hyuuse

Hello, can you also rate my work? It's title is 'The Great Mage Is Not Gifted' please give me your thoughts.

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