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Mahmod_Ana
Mahmod_AnaLv139mthMahmod_Ana

I like the novel i read it until the last chapter but i felt disappointed because I realize that 332+ chapters were wast i didn’t feel that i read 300+ you can tell the same sotry in 100 chapters but you wasted a lot of chapters for nothing and it took way to long for simple thing to acer, some of those chapters where enjoyable but took tooo long like where the girl go ? you know about “the flame of rage that seek revenge!” that event took so long but in the end we never heard about girl again, theirs no way she will still be alive after ‘that’ you probably forgot about her this novel over 300 chapters but only few of them were important the worst part that the small talk or MC after thought in those chapters continue no information about the world background or anything useful to the story just few useful line only here and there thorough the whole 300 chapters!!! truly wast of chapters, if it wast 2000 chapters kind of novel with fast upload to the chapter that want be issue but it’s not....

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Mahmod_Ana
Mahmod_AnaLv13Mahmod_Ana

I know about her name but i don’t want to spoiler to anyone and i know you didn’t forget about her but what “happening” right now can’t leave her unharm senes even “somone” father who is high noble rank erased after what “happened” along with many people !! So how someone like her could survive this huge event ? , -/ Also quick question why becoming like Req doesn’t have any downside to it ? She can do anything latery anything normal people do maybe she can also have relationships with the Zero in sexual level maybe she can be Pregnant with his child !!! her body limitations is not clear at all??, /- Also is Req lesbian or something ? her flash back give me impression that she is into girls only or something of that sort 🤔?, : I’m trying here to guess who is Zero lover (FL) unfortunately the information about Req body and if she is interested in girls only or not is close to none, so I can’t include her as FL candidate.., I hope you can answer some of those questions if possible, love this novel i hope you don’t drop it please 🙏🏼.

moon_senpai:I know that by "that girl" you are most likely talking about Xara, and no I haven't forgotten any. In fact, I keep a proper track of my characters.SPOLIER ALERT FOR THOSE WHO HAVEN'T READ THE CHAPTERS:Now as I said I haven't forgotten about her, the last line that you mentioned in your comment was a foreshadowing for later and she will be used in the later arcs (quite soon actually), just like Winston's friends and Nsiria were used later in the academy arc.And yeah, I agree about some chapters feeling long, that's because there's lot of monologue in it
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I know that by "that girl" you are most likely talking about Xara, and no I haven't forgotten any. In fact, I keep a proper track of my characters.SPOLIER ALERT FOR THOSE WHO HAVEN'T READ THE CHAPTERS:Now as I said I haven't forgotten about her, the last line that you mentioned in your comment was a foreshadowing for later and she will be used in the later arcs (quite soon actually), just like Winston's friends and Nsiria were used later in the academy arc.And yeah, I agree about some chapters feeling long, that's because there's lot of monologue in it