more than readable. i think it could use a little more excitement but it's not that bad. imo mc needs to mature a bit more before i can praise her but for now it's fine. the world building is fairly interesting. Author could up things up by being more descriptive and learning how set a scene better for the readers and inspire more emotions out of them. the author is still learning from what I can see so who knows the future holds. I will continue to read to see how this seed blossoms!
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