Review Detail of DaoistH0qkyJ in Primogenitor in Marvel

Concept is good.... writing quality is also good.. I've read only 20 chapters till now but i can't because there are several flaws...1. MC not taking control of his situation..he woke up and since then going with the flow2. MC not having any goal or ambition clearly 3. Dialogues are very bland.. there's no fluidity 4. It's bloody Marvel and for 20 chapters in the novel he spent his time chasing skirts... it's like reading a dating novel or reading Twilight