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Review Detail of Gscar_24 in I'm Spider-Man (MCU)

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This review is at the time of ch 551 was published. The story was great at the start and had momentum by establishing the characters, plots, training arc etc. I enjoyed it and looked forward to reading it everyday with the stable updates it had. The character descriptions and world building were good with minimal to lack of grammatical errors which never broke the story emmersion for me. Somewhere along the way around 150 plus chapters, I started noticing that magic learned by the MC just became a plot device for any inconvenience or conflict they had to resolve with no repercussions. This may seem like stating the obvious for some or "that's what magic exactly is" but for an engaging story if you overuse a trope it becomes stale. In some arcs where he's doing multiversal travelling, the MC changed some stuff in the timeline that there was little to no repercussions, getting so OP that it's like doing side missions. This maybe the obvious course for any OP MC who has been on a long win streak but this leads to like situations where there is no urgency of the threat or the feeling of odds stacked against him. Anything seemingly impossible comes up, he pulls a magic spell out his ass conveniently which just needs to be prepared with no consequences. To conclude my thoughts, it still is a good fanfic to read but i have lost interest along the way and read for the sake of reading it. It did spike my interest back up with a recent arc where the MC and his companion travels to a universe and holds back their powers and explore an apocalytic world which was really fun to read.

I'm Spider-Man (MCU)

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