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Review Detail of Pclerk in I'm Spider-Man (MCU)

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The quality of the writing and updates have been steady since the beginning. They are both really good. The issues start to come as the story develops and goes into the authors own stuff or changes. In the beginning it’s good but the development becomes a typical weird power fantasy where the MC gets everything and there is no challenge. The characters start off feeling close to what they should be. The further they make it into the story, the more they lose and devolve into the typical bland sides with no personalities; they are like 3 year olds running around. They lose their essence so to speak. The world background doesn’t really get original at all. There are some sequences where the background is directly taken from the moves but other parts need a lot more fleshing out. Some more descriptions of the overall world and surroundings would be nice. It’s still readable if you need something, just overall became a mediocre power fantasy with some weird things incorporated.

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