This novel has potential with the original ideas the Author has, if he can start the school arc already (please be in first high) and the oc isn’t another background character who gives his input every now and then. Your writing quality has definitely improved over the chapters and is much better, keep it up! Please make sure the oc is included in the main story, so he has his own moments.
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