An interesting story.......... but the character's rise in power is a bit slow, there are few things in the writing that need to be changed and more important to me is that the author uses deity to refer to the domain of the character and it is not deity but divinity and the MC is not a God, he is a demi-god, that they do not have divinity or domain, they only have it when they are promoted to gods ..... but the rest is fine ..
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