Review Detail of Chummy in Ultimate Alpha Male System (Dropped)
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it started good but it now become bad, i don't why author think its good idea to help another protagonist to get girl even having quest to do it, it kinda turn off me to read, there's no connection in story too, just wasting chapter i read some fanfic where mc become helper of protagonist all of it went bad
Ultimate Alpha Male System (Dropped)
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Thatâ also why it wasnât really mentioned as much later on as it was happening in the background as a whole, if your just getting hung up on that one chapter where it was a main focus then your not gonna see the later chapters that have nothing to do with that until the chapter that ends that quest which takes less than a chapter overall
''My bride is a mermaid''. The wimp of an MC from that anime is the one who he was helping out, though honestly i just skipped every part of their dialogue, which honestly wasnt even much but yeah.
M7TH1C:What protagonist does he help?
OneMoreScore:Thatâ also why it wasnât really mentioned as much later on as it was happening in the background as a whole, if your just getting hung up on that one chapter where it was a main focus then your not gonna see the later chapters that have nothing to do with that until the chapter that ends that quest which takes less than a chapter overall
But, that's just that. He only have 2 girls anyways. What could go wrong? And our mc is hypnotizing him too.
Pekokopiko:One chapter is enough reason for people to drop some story
it's like NTR I guess ? it doesn't change the story by much but most people drop the story because of that.
Sky_TheEnder132:But, that's just that. He only have 2 girls anyways. What could go wrong? And our mc is hypnotizing him too.
qazx_mutationtypes:it's like NTR I guess ? it doesn't change the story by much but most people drop the story because of that.