Review Detail of Dollar in Kurokawa clan

The story is good, there are very few naruto wareing states fanfics, wich is a great + Grammer needs some work, maybe use grammerly? MC alredy has 2 kekkei genkai, hope that he will not get anymore. He is alredy abit too strong for his age. Everything else is good, maybe one last thing: MC needs more charakter develovement.