Review Detail of MisterClaps in A Killer Can't Change

Heyyo author here again, Noticed that I STILL make a ton of mistakes like forgetting a word, missing a word, butchering spellings and even writing sentences that make no sense. I downloaded Grammarly to my phone like 2 days ago so that helped reduce the amount of mistakes I made, but Grammarly has a hard time detecting when a word is either missing or when a dialogue symbol is missing or when a sentence makes no sense. I will be going back to revise my previous chapters to try and fix them when I have time, but sadly I got little free time AND even if I did, I would still miss some of these mistakes So here's the IMPORTANT bit, please comment any typo you find, any sentences that feel off/like you don't get it, any spelling mistakes, any Name mistakes. I try to keep my novels clean from those simple mistakes, but there's only so much my eyes can notice. Sorry again for dishing out chapter after chapter all filled with mistakes. I am not gonna tell you to expect me to change instantly, I'mm 100% sure there will be mistakes in the next chapter and probably the next still. It's my first time writing so hopefully over time I learn how to avoid typing as much mistakes and learn how to notice errors when I revise more. accurately.