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Review Detail of Anoscetia in Everyone Wants to Pamper Miss Zhuang After Her Rebirth!

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Anoscetia
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WARNING!!! MINOR SPOILERS AHEAD!!! Dropping this at chapter 130. I've read a lot of similar plots like this one. Actually, it's very fine for me if some things are a little cliche such as OP FL, secret identities, etc. However, I think the so-called mystery surrounding the FL is poorly executed and not well-written enough. it's just like giving her OP identities one after another just to say she's talented. I mean, there's no sense of mystery or thrill in discovering her hidden vests, instead it just looks cliche. I can't feel any excitement with her hidden identities at all. Also, the faceslapping is not satisfying enough. It's expected for this kind of stories to have a lot of stupid cannon fodders pestering the Fl to serve as her foil but at least make the face slapping interesting and satisfying, for example make sure that they won't appear again, especially if they're just small villains. I'm still in chapter 130 and there's already a lot of stupid fools being arrogant and brainless, I don't know how much more exhausting it'll be when the FL started going to the university. I'm sure that there will be another handful of stupid bunches going after the FL. Also, although I've already accepted the fact that age doesn't matter when having many secret identities in this kind of story, but it still kinda bother me when the author portrays a minor with words such as seductive, sexy, hot, etc. If the author used words like a beauty that can ruin a city to describe the FL's appearance, I'm still fine with it as he/she just want to say that the FL is very beautiful. But the words I've mentioned, I think it's still a little bit inappropriate to describe a 16-year-old girl. If she's already of legal age, I'll be fine with that. Not to mention the ML who went after a 16-year-old girl, albeit not officially. If the setting is in Ancient China, I have no qualms with the FL's young age as it's normal in there for even 14 years old to be engaged, but the setting here is modern. Anyway, aside from age and poor execution of portraying a mysterious FL, I also don't have a first good impression about the FL, thus, I might have a prejudice against her. I don't know if there's a hidden and valid reason but according to the FL, she betrayed the Zhuang family to gain the love of her biological family, then she was betrayed by them. I can't sympathize with her because it's karma. Therefore, I also can't integrate well with the FL's mood when she's out for revenge or when she's protecting the Zhuang family. For the things that she has done to her adopted family in her previous life, I guess it's just made sense even if she dies to protect them. Don't say I'm too ruthless, after all, the consequences of her betrayal also pushed the Zhuang family to death in her previous life. Her so-called protectiveness towards the Zhuang family actually looks atonement for her sins to me. Anyway, the story isn't just engaging for me. As for the translation, pronouns were mistranslated, and some names were mixed up that can lead to confusion.

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Everyone Wants to Pamper Miss Zhuang After Her Rebirth!

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