Review Detail of HydeMary in Fate/Mercenary: A travel across the omniverse.

Item: Fate/Mercenary: A travel across the omniverse.
Rating: 5

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HydeMaryLv139mthHydeMary

Interesting start, this is fun.. some errors here and there but not much, hope the story continue to be interesting and fun as well in the future development 👍

Fate/Mercenary: A travel across the omniverse.

Stuckinapileofbook

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StuckinapileofbookAuthorStuckinapileofbook

Thanks you for the review With the mistakes I have been improving and started using Grammarly to correct most of my errors. I have tried to change some of the previous ones, but for some reason the platform doesn't allow it. hahaha

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HydeMaryLv13HydeMary

nah, doesnt matter much... yknow MTL, its a lot worse but i read many kinds and got used to it that my brain just auto correct everything.. so in this one, its just a mild grammar and spelling mistakes, so its much better and im not a keyboard warrior.. what i want is just the story and plot, just here for excitement 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣👌👌👌

Stuckinapileofbook:Thanks you for the review With the mistakes I have been improving and started using Grammarly to correct most of my errors. I have tried to change some of the previous ones, but for some reason the platform doesn't allow it. hahaha
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