Review Detail of ghast_shooter66 in Fate/Mercenary: A travel across the omniverse.

Thank you for your review, as for how the MCU looks like I know that I don't talk a lot about it, but am sure than more than once I described his physical appearance. To some degree I admit that he does what the system ask him, but tbh what did you expected? In the current world he is in a mission and he agreed to follow the missions.

I get what your saying I’m and I am fine if he follows just the system’s quests a lot I’m just saying the quests are basic and are over used or feel really similar to a lot of other over used quests in other fan fic with system

Yeah I understand that, maybe because I am still inexperienced I got repetitive hahahaha. But I think that the mission on chapter XXVII with the exception of the first point of the mission I got a little bit more creative hahaha. Anyways I will take this as reference to improve in the next mission so readers don't get bored or tired, thanks you very much for your opinion.