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Though the author said that hes doing this to help him with his writing block .this is actually well done. Unlike other fan fiction or non cannon sequel authors who can't even use the proper punctuation. also, the story development is just cool. though the chapters are short, it took 5 chapters to go for the main plot while giving hints on the first four ,without revealing too much. fan fiction authors nowadays spoon feed you with information that it gets boring later on. also, the author managed to keep the original characters ' attitude. like Yuna, she's the only one to apologize . Shinwoo is still noisy, and Ikhan is still a weakling. then we have a new character. Hana is the name, and it seems she's the gf of our Ikhan. I wonder why the author decided to do that? 🤔 I would ask that you use shinwoo and the others because they're a great addition to the story.

Dark Lords: A Noblesse Sequel

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Thank You so much for reading. Your review means a lot. 3njoy!