Review Detail of Sarcastic_Ape in Master of The Great Dao

Hello Readers, Author here, As you might guess this is the first time I am writing a novel. Expect a slow start as the Mc adjusts to his life in a foreign world. This will be a cultivation story where Mc has a System. Please comment below if you have any sort of Reviews / Feedback / Suggestions. I will be needing your suggestions to improve myself. Treat this comment as a Q/A link. Ask your questions here, I will try to answer them if possible.