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Earl_McClain
Earl_McClainLv111yrEarl_McClain

this was a great book at the beginning, but seriously it delved into a troupe , human in monster skin, no true world building, as we barely know much about it. then lest not talk about Anna, it's her story apparently 🤷. but moku our "Supposed MC" isn't really likable, but you don't hate him he's just boring & closed minded. then you all these forms with different ideologies & background that truly isn't necessary to explain them in such detail; too much trying to promote his culture with the naming sense (Author him/herself). levels & ranks are too complicated , & too much emphasis on moku's power , not necessarily moku himself as growth in character. no is he allowing his other Main Orcs get Character Development. Orcs being in shambles (Crying) because his brother died is blasphemy , they are Raging creatures where killing is second nature death of those near is nothing new , they knew this before moku even came to their world. these aren't Orcs , Not Monsters , but just Green Humans smh 🤦 & please for the love of the readers who probably still read this , stop saying "Moku this Moku that each sentence. here's an example Moku looked up at his assailant, gauging the distance from which he could strike. Then he took a stance and activated his "Such & Such" form.

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Earl_McClain
Earl_McClainLv11Earl_McClain

an example of correct grammar

BugatiCatForm
BugatiCatFormAuthorBugatiCatForm

The truth is, the real MC of this story are the orcs, cause the title is The Record Of Orc Civilization not The Record of Moku Civilization. So of course as the author I focus so much in development of the orcs. Moku it self is only the trigger which bring the new way of life for the orc. The reason I so much focus on Anna (or Nevare in later chapter) is because she is the first she-orc, the progenitor queen of all female orc in their long history. In the matter of this, the rise of Nevare as the first of her kind is more important then Moku's development itself cause without woman there is no family, and without family there is no civilization. Sorry for the grammar is my first English book and I still learning...

orangegummy
orangegummyLv12orangegummy

philippines orc haha