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This story caught my attention with how it was written. I've seen many books that try to do alternate POVs and fail to execute them properly. But this one does it quite well. Synopsis: This was interesting and well done. It provided dialogue that hints at the personalities of the characters and then expounds on it further with details. Well done, author, but there were like one or two missing words and letters. I believe this could be fixed with editing. Writing Quality: Excellent. But just as I had stated in the synopsis, there are a few missing words and letters in some sentences. Nothing major but revising your chapter would help. World Background: I think the world-building is pretty well done. The story builds just at the right pace and serves the reader a nice contradiction between the male Mc and the female Mc. Good job. Overall: Not much to criticize. The book is captivating and well done. Keep up the good work, author!!

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