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Review Detail of Dartz in Outside Of Time

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Dartz
DartzLv121yrDartz

The story is great and the background and works building is also above what you see in novels nowadays, but around chapter 68 the translation quality takes a huge nosedive. It seems like either there is no editor to double check and correct errors, or the translator changed. Grammar goes out the window, some phrases become incomprehensible while others become carry on sentences and the diamond sect suddenly becomes the King Kong Sect in a few chapters only to be referred to as Diamond sect again later. The story needs some serious cleaning up.

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Outside Of Time

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Dartz
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World building*