Review Detail of ranmaro in The King's Age

The usual shameless review from the author :)))))))))))) Welcome to my novel! I have prepared a lot for this novel here. I believe I kept working on it for four months already. I just had a few ideas to upgrade a game, League of legends if you know it, and decided to write a novel and implement these ideas there. Here you will find an interesting story about a young gamer who was pro and turned down by his team, going to the states and starting over at a new game. A cliché it might seem indeed, and I can't say anything against this. But I didn't focus entirely over making it all original to be frank. The setting might be cliché but it's suitable for the novel I'm writing, and I love this setting so much so it's cool for me. The things I wanted to introduce here are just few upgrades at the hardware of games, the way of playing the game, and how it can evolve to match the upcoming technology in the near future... All under a good novel that anyone can enjoy reading for sure. It's not a VR game novel, as fully developed massive VR games won't appear in our world this soon anyway. This novel here is just a step that can bring us closer from the upcoming VR world of gaming. What do you expect here? 1. Good novel in game concept, writing quality, steady and good rate update. The update rate is one to two chaps per day, with chaps over 2k words in general. 2. Good characters, fleshed out to be like any real gamer you might know, perhaps even yourself :D. 3. Good character development. 4. Lots of fun and adventures. 5. A romance is there indeed, a struggle of two lovers to be together is the backbone of this novel. 6. It has harem - Not a big one - but the MC is someone who can't say no to a beauty. 7. The novel is a mix between the real life and gaming life. Even the early 30 chaps will focus over the real life issues and how the mc will handle them. So you can consider it to be a slice of life novel + gaming novel. 8. I can't say the MC is OP. He is just someone with great talent and skill that will make up look OP especially when surrounded with normal and common gamers. I hope you like my novel, and I'm open for any suggestions. If you see anything wrong, please tell me about it and I'll take your point into my consideration for sure. Enjoy and have fun :))))))))