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Item: EDEN LOCKER 'S MAGUS SYSTEM {I-XI} And THE BLACK CREST FAMILY
Rating: 4.6

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It's an interesting fantasy story to read, but there are a few sentence uses that are not quite right. The story flows, but there are some parts that are a bit confusing. Keep up the good work author!

EDEN LOCKER 'S MAGUS SYSTEM {I-XI} And THE BLACK CREST FAMILY

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Thank you so much. I know that I have a lot of mistakes. But, I will keep working hard to improve By the way, thanks a lot for letting me know the errors. That was a great help

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