Review Detail of Mel_Aniv in EDEN LOCKER 'S MAGUS SYSTEM {I-XI} And THE BLACK CREST FAMILY

The story is pretty decent for me. It has the potential I must say. Writing quality is okay but I spotted several ones. Though not to be a big deal and I still enjoyed my reading. The pacing is fine and also the narration. All in all, a good read. Improve more and I hope you will become a veteran author in the future. 😉