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Overall a very promising story! The beginning began with an exciting plot line, and the subsequent chapters were also cliffhangers in their own rights. However, I would advise for you to proofread a bit (I gave writing quality a 4/5). Especially, most sentences had capitalization errors, and there were often issues with punctuation as well. I think reading over your chapters once after writing them would help improve these errors drastically. But other than that, pacing and story design is great! Good luck!

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thank you đŸ’«