Review Detail of Twitchy_ in Bloody Saint

Buckle up y'all. Seems like we're going to be on a journey for this one... I'm reading it right now and let me just say that Ch2 was a short one, but it was also the one that hooked me in because I was upset it was so short, that I wanted to read more! Author, I'm not sure how you did that, but it worked. And now I'm attached.