Review Detail of _Shades_ in The shadow of dead.

Mmmmm!😤 Okay, I like this story, it's more like I'm being immersed into an horror Indian movie. But you need to make improvements in your writing. I understand that English is not your major language, but you could have the help of an editor to proofread this. World building is definitely awesome, I give you 5stars in that. Writing... You need to improve, that's why I'm giving four stars, especially because I don't know which is the dialogue. Your book is awesome, and you're gonna make it on this platform. The sky is your starting point, author!😉