Review Detail of SAU in Brave Soul Of Evil Supremacy

I don't own this novel completely i read it and found that it has very great potential but the author wasted it by introducing useless cliches in between and turning the character development in the most stupid way possible. So i wanted to satisfy myself bt rewriting it into a better story i hope you guys can support me in this mission. And if the author is reading this i want to tell you that you are very good author and I apologise for stealing your work but i hope you can let me try making this work into a better piece that can be loved by everyone. Thank You ❣️