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Review Detail of Panizalol in Leveling Endlessly with the Strongest System!

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PanizalolLv21yrPanizalol

Looks good and has potential, unfortunately, the webnovel authors have changed recently and started thinking that they are funny and can convey strong emotions by using uppercase letters. You are not funny, and these jokes in your novel feel forced and only serve to ruin the flow of what could be a good story. I am tired of 20-30 year old authors trying to make funny conversations between a young protagonist and an old man. Please stop using "old fart", i cant take it anymore. Moreover, making giant paragraphs of uppercase letters where the protagonist gives a shitty speech that no human being could ever sit trough without laughing at its absurdity is also pretty terrible. If only the author didnt pander to 13 year old humour. other than that, the world seems pretty intresting with a cool system.

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Leveling Endlessly with the Strongest System!

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