Review Detail of Paradox2000 in MHA: Dark Angel

Writing Quality: So far the writing quality is good, I mostly keeps my expectations low for writing quality in fanfics but this one is still better than most fanfics out there. Updates: So far the updates are stable and good, I hope the author makes this consistency Story Development: The story develops very well, from character interactions to the power system, I can't really find some big flaws in this fanfic considering it as a fanfic. Protagonist: Well personally I like this protagonist a lot, most fanfics either makes a ruthless edgelord of a protagonist or a harem seeking horney mfs. The MC of this novel seems more human, he doesn't have some top tier character development but his character from the beginning is well shaped. He loves his family, have enemies, loves and hates while making decisions that makes his less childish but also something someone of his age would do. Side Characters: Since it's a fanfic there isn't much to say about the side characters but most fanfics I've read mostly butcher the personalities of the side characters but this fanfic blends the OC MC into the world perfectly. One thing that I would like to highlight a scene when Momo came to pick up MC for school in her car and MC's sister asked Momo if she likes him for which Momo replied with a straight "No", I like this instance personally because unlike in other fanfics girls would probably blush question their feelings and especially for Momo because most MHA fanfics used the past of Momo having no friends as an excuse to make her dumb and not realize the difference between the feelings of love and friendship however in this fanfic that particular instance shows that Momo picks the MC up for school because she considers him a friend while also being mature enough to differentiate between the feelings of love and friendship and her deciding who she wants to be with. My issues with it: I don't have some major issues with this fanfic but I'm gonna list some of them 1. I want the novel to add some of it's own plot to it instead of following the entire plot of MHA 2. I wanted the MC to use his resource realm more, he mostly uses it to extract DNAs, I wants him to be more creative with it and have some new abilities for him or pull out a noble phantasm or something. 3. I need some fight scenes for Hana and I also need some interactions between Hana and her friends who left her because she didn't had any quirk.