Review Detail of Blue_Natsu in Returning From Level 900

I have so many novels, and this novel is the only thing I can not understand.. There are no details.. The author seem like missing A LOT OF SENTENCE.. We can tell the author is not good at writing and telling stories.. There are many situations that are hard to understand and confusing.. We can not enjoy reading it if you can not understand.. Either the author is not good at writing a novel or his English is suck.. If you want to waste ur time on this novel, this is for you.. Be aware that your brain might fried.. Try to imagine:- Your friend who is not good telling the story try to told you the story.. And you don't understand the story because there is no detail, and sometimes, it feels like skipping situations. But at least, if you understand your friend story, you can ask QUESTION, but in this situation, we can not ask the author.. So, this is MTL?? hmmmm, it doesn't seem like that..