Honestly it wasn't have great starter, yeah i dunno about other for me it's kind hard to read but i appreciate you. There is some scene that i feel touched like when MC meet the old man again or when he meets Xiao Yi but. Your story development i mean yeah sometimes great novel didn't have an OP MC from start there is time for building the Character but yours kind hard to read Hopefully the development have a great change later on
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