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Rhongomynaid
RhongomynaidLv11yrRhongomynaid

This might have potential but I'm not sure. It's poorly written and the cliches and bad decisions really irk me. Sometimes it's so poorly written I'm not sure if I'm reading a translation error or not, it's genuinely bewildering. He's supposed to be really mature due to everything he's been through but his interactions with the girl who committed suicide and the old intelligence head point to everything but. No to mention the fact that the interactions are embarrassingly poorly thought out, written and executed. It's so unrealistic and not how humans think or act and also just excessively irrational regardless of how emotional he might have felt. The novel as a whole is really unrealistic as well. Everything from the worldbuilding to the power system are so strangely vague that it feels like a mix between intentional vagueness and poor writing. There's also a good chance that the author is just making up stuff as he goes and this is worrying because there're only 19 chapters as of now. I don't care for how uselessly confident the protagonist is. He's literally nothing right now but for some reason his ego is always making enemies. Why'd he have to get the suicide girls attention in public? Why'd he have to be so antagonistic towards the annoying arrogant classmate girl instead of just ignoring her and just using some of that maturity he claims to have? I could go on really but that'd be too long. Overall we've got a weird tower regressor novel with baffling, awkward (from a readers perspective), borderline cringe "emotional" moments. I think this could've been decent if approached differently. 0.5/5

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AzureConqueror
AzureConquerorLv5AzureConqueror

It's not perfect but it's definitely not 0.5 stars. Though I agree about the mc being too emotional because those are people he is close to in his past life. It doesn't mean they won't plot against him because he's being stupid

Rhongomynaid
RhongomynaidLv1Rhongomynaid

The score is a number I've assigned to quantify my enjoyment, there's no science to scores so the 0.5 is not going to change unless I somehow appreciate this novel more somehow. I found the emotional bits to be awkward interactions that make no sense, they gave me second hand embarrassment which is the last thing I want when reading something. Everything else about this isn't very enjoyable or interesting (I've also got other criticism in my review) so I think that score is fair because this is an unenjoyable, awkward, cringy and embarrassing mess and it's genericness fails to make up for any of that. If you think this is decent, go read the average Korean tower novel instead, they're miles better. A lot of the time the MC does literally anything I'm facepalming, this is not entertaining, it's irritating. Anyone who's been reading my reviews for awhile would know that the 0.5 this got is actually a very generous score.

AzureConqueror:It's not perfect but it's definitely not 0.5 stars. Though I agree about the mc being too emotional because those are people he is close to in his past life. It doesn't mean they won't plot against him because he's being stupid
MILARCH
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i found you again