Overall score = 3 Writing quality = 3 Story = 3 Characters = 3 World Background = 3 To be honest I would've given the "world background" and "story development" a 4, but I felt that it was quite forced...? sometimes, for me, it just doesn't make sense. The dialogue also feels somewhat wrong if I say so myself, but your grammar is pretty good so 3. you may think this is quite low, but this is actually one of the good novels I've read here in this site. Everytime I read novels, I always quit at the start if it's so bad. but here it didn't make me leave so its ok. This would be a good novel to past time.
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